Comments on: Lilly Blogs in Haiku: On Frenemies, Heidi Montag, and Fifth Grade (Write Your Own Now!)

By: Joy

Joy — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 23:08:18 +0000

These poems are interesting. Hidden aggression is worse in some ways than aggression. It is not good to have bad lingering feelings for a long time. Get it out somehow. This culture is so too faced. Boys will be boys, and he’s the jolly good fellow, but the girl is always a bitch even when she’s good.

By: Sally

Sally — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 04:47:36 +0000

Im so sad
Horrible haikus
ruining my life
red wine take me away

By: Rachel Simmons

Rachel Simmons — Wed, 27 Jan 2010 16:39:54 +0000

Are you mad at me?
Why did she not call me back?
Let’s go to the mall.

By: Adelaide Dupont

Adelaide Dupont — Wed, 27 Jan 2010 08:16:04 +0000

Talking to myself
Feeling mighty and wild here
And now insecure.

By: Adelaide Dupont

Adelaide Dupont — Wed, 27 Jan 2010 08:14:59 +0000

Power of a woman
Still a girl deep inside of me
Full of potential.